Revising for Style: February 22, 2019

Focus: How can we strengthen the style of our essays to establish command?

1. Introducing ourselves to Academic Vocabulary, Set 5; putting your academic vocabulary to work in your Invisible Man essays

2. Peer/self editing each other's essays for structure and evidence (try to partner up with someone who addressed the same question that you did)

3. Offering you a recap of our first stylistic lesson (avoiding redundancy) and an introduction to our next stylistic lesson (using active voice)

• Click HERE for the slides on style.

4. Peer editing each other's essays for style

HW:
1. For MONDAY:

Please finish all revisions for content and style and PRINT your essay to turn in.

2. For WEDNESDAY:

Please share with me (or conference with me on) your project proposals and essay thesis statements.